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Marching on dead feet
over a field of gray
we lost the soul
we lost ourselves
in a time we'll never forget
we're an army of dead men.
Innocence gone
hearts lost
Those who shoved us into this world
were lost long ago
as a wage of war.

Even the shallowest scratch
cuts to the bone
with a story we don't care to tell
some still scream
when in the heat of battle
they find another hollow
in the very flesh of their souls.
But most can no longer muster a tear
as we march
doing the dirty work of the devil.

An army of dead men.
We only wish we could care
wow this made the front page? not even in my wildest dreams did i think that could happen, thank you all so much. I have to tell V (the one who had the dream), sorry for any spelling errors it was late at night and i was typing kinda fast, i'll probably go back and fix it later on today.Yes it does have a picture front the cd "The Black Parade" which happens to be my favorite cd of all time, IDK i just got that image in my head when i was writing it. Thank You All :D

inspired by a dream my friend had aabout scars thatmade hollows in your flesh. And of course i dramatized it so drastically it became this depressing imbodiment of war....she did say she saw an army at the very of the dream that was a lot like this, and that no one else could see the hollows, and that when she went to help them they disappeared. The concept grabbed me, i'm probably gonna do and actual drawing but it firstly made me think of the black parade so brava, bravisimo, stupenda and all that shit.

Btw the pic came from google
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:iconikagahe:
iKagahe Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
spelled 'field' wrong in line two.
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah sorry i know
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:iconikagahe:
iKagahe Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
no no it's fine.
but you can change it, you know? :>
i'm sorry HAHA typos bother me
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's chill, i actually thought i had let me just get that now :)
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:iconkingofspartans:
kingofspartans Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012   General Artist
Wow this is awesome
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:iconbulletsembrace:
BulletsEmbrace Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
"Even the shallowest scratch
cuts to the bone"

Best line. I love this.
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:icongizmogremlin77:
GizmoGremlin77 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
I'm honored O.O
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
vince i'm sorry but this was victoria's dream....youcan still be honored though :)
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:icongizmogremlin77:
GizmoGremlin77 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
lol all you said was V. I got confused lol
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
there are just too many "V"s in my life :)
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:icongizmogremlin77:
GizmoGremlin77 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
I'm on the top of your list, though, right?
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you and victoria are still fighting for that spot ;)
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:icongizmogremlin77:
GizmoGremlin77 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Tell victoria to watch out!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
umm, well i'd tell you the same, seeing as how she's begun to leave scabs all over my arms from our playfights. I'd hate to see what she could to you *nervous laugh*
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LostGryphin Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow - so descriptive! The picture goes very well with the poem. And I must agree with the comment below:

"Even the shallowest scratch
cuts to the bone"

These are my favorite lines!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much, i'm so happy you enjoyed it enough to find a favorite line :D
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:iconthecloverparadox:
TheCloverParadox Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
"Even the shallowest scratch
cuts to the bone"

I love those lines. Amazing poem.
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much, i'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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:icongothwannabe:
gothwannabe Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
This made the front page! Congrats my fellow MCRmy soldier!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i had a hard time believing that until i saw it, thank you!
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:icongothwannabe:
gothwannabe Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
I always alert fellow MCRmy soldiers when their work ends up on the front page. You're welcome.
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D that's great of you, thanks again
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:iconclear-darkness:
Clear-Darkness Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
I was going to say, this pic looks like it came from My Chemical Romance's CD, Welcome To The Black Parade. Very nice poem
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
and you would be correct :) thankyou very much!
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:iconclear-darkness:
Clear-Darkness Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Your welcome
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:icontapper101:
tapper101 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Finally some good poetry on DA. So sick of the cheesy love crap. I really enjoyed this one!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know, everyone is obsessed with "love." Thank you so much!

Btw your icon is awesome
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:icondemonofthecakexx:
DemonOfTheCakeXx Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
wow this is epic!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! i didn't expect it to be liked by this many people
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:icondemonofthecakexx:
DemonOfTheCakeXx Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
really?! its amazing, so no wonder people love it, cause its awesome!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much
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:icondemonofthecakexx:
DemonOfTheCakeXx Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
welcome :heart:
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:iconjangobergheim:
jangobergheim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
feel like i lived this dream
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
0.0 awesome :D
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:icononurahi:
Onurahi Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Try making something, like this, but something like a song! Like a hymn of the dead))
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that sound like a good idea, i just might ;)
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:icononurahi:
Onurahi Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Good! Really!)))
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:iconraffag:
Raffag Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Nice !
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! love your icon btw
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:iconandrejmoone:
AndrejMoone Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it !
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much!
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:iconandrejmoone:
AndrejMoone Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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:icondeviruu:
deviruu Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012   General Artist
Great use of imagery; I could basically see the whole thing in my head. Which may lead to me getting my own nightmares xD
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Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh no, don't do that xD i don't think it was even a nightmare in the first place, just a weird dream, she repeated it the next night as well actually o.e
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Emeny-kun Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My god, this is amazing!
I really adore that dark and gothical atmosphere you have made, really MCR.
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! i definitely need to draw this now lol
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:iconemeny-kun:
Emeny-kun Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeeessshhh!! I'll watch you, so I can see the possibly even MORE amazing outcome of this!!
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:iconheathen-god:
Heathen-God Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well...that certainly put the expectations through the roof....good, challenges are fun :D
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KlaxonLithology Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not bad, check your grammar.

6/10
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